These distant mountains speak

[tryingtobeme]

Hey Hannah,

I loved this poem. I think that one overarching thing to work on is fluidity -- especially between the first and second stanzas. The imagery was wonderful, and I definetly think should be kept in, if not added upon. As for your title, try reciting the poem out loud, and attempting to capture the feeling you have while reading it aloud. Keep up the great work!