01-16-2018, 06:20 AM
Hello Hannah 
Well I am pretty new to poetry so my opinion won´t be as extensive as others´. From what I got your poem is about a place that holds a lot of emotional meaning for you (or someone). I really like the way you depict the scenery in general, how you describe the emotional relationship between yourself and the place, as if you were mesmerized and at the same time intrigued by it. I would also like you to expand more on the analogy of the mountains speaking. Or perhaps just to know what they are saying, being a symbolic or literal thing.
Well I am pretty new to poetry so my opinion won´t be as extensive as others´. From what I got your poem is about a place that holds a lot of emotional meaning for you (or someone). I really like the way you depict the scenery in general, how you describe the emotional relationship between yourself and the place, as if you were mesmerized and at the same time intrigued by it. I would also like you to expand more on the analogy of the mountains speaking. Or perhaps just to know what they are saying, being a symbolic or literal thing.