Bowling Green's Underbelly

Bowling Green's Underbelly

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#16

01-13-2018, 02:51 PM

A poem can be about real things. Tupac dropped some mean beats as well, his music had rythm. He added something to reality to make it matter. Tupac obviously was a great musician and performer, but that doesn’t make him a great poet. They are two very different things.

Your poem, i’m just here to offer my critique.

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Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-12-2018, 04:04 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ellajam - 01-12-2018, 06:25 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by CRNDLSM - 01-13-2018, 06:17 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2018, 08:46 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-13-2018, 08:51 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2018, 08:54 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-13-2018, 08:56 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by tectak - 01-13-2018, 09:47 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by billy - 01-13-2018, 11:56 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by CRNDLSM - 01-13-2018, 10:14 AM