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Bowling Green's Underbelly

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01-13-2018, 11:56 AM (This post was last modified: 01-13-2018, 11:57 AM by billy.)

(01-13-2018, 08:46 AM)shemthepenman Wrote: this is an embarrassingly awful rap, and an even worse poem. my suggestion is read more, listen to something that isn't fucking tupac and throw this shit in the bin.

and i'll wait for ella to launch this sage advice off the forum... and then re-post it...

this is on forum. you're perma banned.admin/billy newbs are not here for us to bully. harsh feedback is fine if you justify it

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Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-12-2018, 04:04 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ellajam - 01-12-2018, 06:25 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by CRNDLSM - 01-13-2018, 06:17 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2018, 08:46 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-13-2018, 08:51 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2018, 08:54 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-13-2018, 08:56 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by tectak - 01-13-2018, 09:47 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by billy - 01-13-2018, 11:56 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by CRNDLSM - 01-13-2018, 10:14 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by billy - 01-13-2018, 12:13 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-13-2018, 02:14 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by billy - 01-13-2018, 03:46 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by QDeathstar - 01-13-2018, 01:07 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by QDeathstar - 01-13-2018, 02:32 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-13-2018, 02:39 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by vagabond - 01-13-2018, 03:10 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by QDeathstar - 01-13-2018, 02:51 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by Knot - 01-16-2018, 02:25 AM

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