01-13-2018, 09:47 AM
(01-13-2018, 08:56 AM)ADUnser Wrote:Shem appears to interpret "basic" in a somewhat simplistic way...it is the best he can do. You can assume that this mod is not on shem's side.Consructive crit of the poem please...first rule...and, of course, it is a common courtesy. Hmm...shem might have interpretive problems with "common". Come on...play nicely....Mod(01-13-2018, 08:54 AM)shemthepenman Wrote:No, you gave no actual criticism of the poem or its content. Calling something awful is not useful feedback which is why it's a violation of the guidelines on this forum... I don't think I'm a fantastic writer but I know for a fact this is not an awful poem. If you want to give me some real feedback, go ahead, but otherwise take your negativity somewhere else.(01-13-2018, 08:51 AM)ADUnser Wrote: Well for one, if you read the intro you'd know this wasn't a rap, and two I posted it here because I'm trying to get better at writing. Thanks for being an ass though.i stand by my comment, it'll will improve your writing.