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Bowling Green's Underbelly

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01-13-2018, 08:51 AM

(01-13-2018, 08:46 AM)shemthepenman Wrote: this is an embarrassingly awful rap, and an even worse poem. my suggestion is read more, listen to something that isn't fucking tupac and throw this shit in the bin.

and i'll wait for ella to launch this sage advice off the forum... and then re-post it...

Well for one, if you read the intro you'd know this wasn't a rap, and two I posted it here because I'm trying to get better at writing. Thanks for being an ass though.

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Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-12-2018, 04:04 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ellajam - 01-12-2018, 06:25 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by CRNDLSM - 01-13-2018, 06:17 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2018, 08:46 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-13-2018, 08:51 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by shemthepenman - 01-13-2018, 08:54 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-13-2018, 08:56 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by tectak - 01-13-2018, 09:47 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by billy - 01-13-2018, 11:56 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by CRNDLSM - 01-13-2018, 10:14 AM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by billy - 01-13-2018, 12:13 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-13-2018, 02:14 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by billy - 01-13-2018, 03:46 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by QDeathstar - 01-13-2018, 01:07 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by QDeathstar - 01-13-2018, 02:32 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by ADUnser - 01-13-2018, 02:39 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by vagabond - 01-13-2018, 03:10 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by QDeathstar - 01-13-2018, 02:51 PM

RE: Bowling Green's Underbelly - by Knot - 01-16-2018, 02:25 AM

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