01-09-2018, 06:52 AM
I like the title because it makes me think of the observer paradox. I also like the use of repetition (especially look), the specific choices such as killer whale tank, flouride-white teeth, and the effective ending.
The observer sees suffering and by using a sea world motif--the observer contributes to the suffering.
Nicely done!
The observer sees suffering and by using a sea world motif--the observer contributes to the suffering.
Nicely done!
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson