01-02-2018, 01:19 PM
Hi Knot,
Thank you for posting that version. Although it was considered, I couldn't bring myself to delete so much, esp. when I feel that the sunlight patches/fruit metaphor feels so important. I'm also pretty satisfied with the length now. Your version has inspired a few tweaks in my latest edit though.
Best, Alex
Thank you for posting that version. Although it was considered, I couldn't bring myself to delete so much, esp. when I feel that the sunlight patches/fruit metaphor feels so important. I'm also pretty satisfied with the length now. Your version has inspired a few tweaks in my latest edit though.
Best, Alex

