Grass

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Nice poem! I like a lot about this.
I'm just wondering about the commas after "and" in line four and six. They kind of threw me off. Grammatically they aren't necessary, so I'm wondering if it was done purposefully for a rhythm effect? But I'm not sure it's necessary if that is the case.

hey, thanks Hannah. The commas are tricky. Sometimes the hands type stuff to rules that aren't there. I'll see about editing it, Hannah. See how it all works out in the end. Thanks again!