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01-02-2018, 05:02 AM

Nice poem! I like a lot about this.
I'm just wondering about the commas after "and" in line four and six. They kind of threw me off. Grammatically they aren't necessary, so I'm wondering if it was done purposefully for a rhythm effect? But I'm not sure it's necessary if that is the case.

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