Home, after the first shower of monsoon

Home, after the first shower of monsoon

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12-30-2017, 10:13 AM

(12-23-2017, 08:30 AM)Radetof.Yahska Wrote: Home, after the first shower of monsoon

Fading petrichor
Steaming puddles
Virgin mud

Streaking brown bodies
Blazing heavens
Dazed insects

Drowsy grandfathers
Mosquito repellants // fix the syllables here; it should be 4 in DA-dum DA-dum pattern. try 'Killed Mosquitos'
Buttery toots

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Home, after the first shower of monsoon - by Radetof.Yahska - 12-23-2017, 08:30 AM

RE: Home, after the first shower of monsoon - by busker - 12-23-2017, 08:19 PM

RE: Home, after the first shower of monsoon - by Radetof.Yahska - 12-24-2017, 02:11 AM

RE: Home, after the first shower of monsoon - by vagabond - 12-24-2017, 04:45 AM

RE: Home, after the first shower of monsoon - by Radetof.Yahska - 12-26-2017, 01:25 PM

RE: Home, after the first shower of monsoon - by AttnAttack - 12-30-2017, 10:13 AM

RE: Home, after the first shower of monsoon - by Radetof.Yahska - 05-29-2018, 06:21 PM

RE: Home, after the first shower of monsoon - by Tonyko - 07-11-2018, 11:08 AM

RE: Home, after the first shower of monsoon - by billy - 06-29-2019, 11:17 AM

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