LOVING HANDS

[ADUnser]

I like the poem but I think the last portion could use some work. If you could cut it down to 3 lines it would make the poem look more structured to me. Also if you choose to keep the "like your runny nose" line I would maybe reword it. The way it's worded now sounds like you're comparing the fact that you share everything to a trait of the child's runny nose. Overall though, this is a sweet poem and I like the "dad" theme you're going with.