12-26-2017, 08:26 AM
(12-26-2017, 07:31 AM)ellajam Wrote:Always found "still" to be an exceedingly useful word, manifold in meaning and connotation. Also has a bit of an ellipsis quality about it. Still...(12-26-2017, 06:41 AM)shemthepenman Wrote: seriously, the original is perfect. moving the “still” around is the epitome of unnecessary faffing about. of which milo is definitely a pro.Always fun to think about it and see what happens with a shuffle. That's what I'm here for, the faffing about, enjoyment in the play.
The light of day is a wonderful thing to open your eyes to, as is a frienly chat, especially when its about poems.
Wishing you some happiness in the new year, shem.

