12-26-2017, 07:31 AM
(12-26-2017, 06:41 AM)shemthepenman Wrote: seriously, the original is perfect. moving the “still” around is the epitome of unnecessary faffing about. of which milo is definitely a pro.Always fun to think about it and see what happens with a shuffle. That's what I'm here for, the faffing about, enjoyment in the play.
The light of day is a wonderful thing to open your eyes to, as is a friendly chat, especially when it's about poems.
Wishing you some happiness in the new year, shem.
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