First Edit: The Search

First Edit: The Search

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12-25-2017, 12:03 AM

Hey chopblock,
Thanks for the feedback. The last line was something I struggled with when I wrote this yesterday, so I greatly appreciate your thoughts on its effectiveness. It seems like I might have achieved some of what I was going for here, but it needs some edits.

Thanks again,
Richard

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First Edit: The Search - by Richard - 12-24-2017, 06:53 AM

RE: The Search - by chopblock - 12-24-2017, 01:09 PM

RE: The Search - by Richard - 12-25-2017, 12:03 AM

RE: First Edit: The Search - by Richard - 01-14-2018, 01:23 AM

RE: First Edit: The Search - by Knot - 01-15-2018, 02:46 AM

RE: First Edit: The Search - by Richard - 01-15-2018, 04:34 AM

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