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Mental Block
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12-24-2017, 12:55 PM
I really appreciate the aesthetic of the way the poem looks on paper. As the clock ticks, the lines get shorter which really cause you to read faster and faster as you progress through the poem. This creates a certain anxiety that I believe you were trying to recreate and I think this was done very well.
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Mental Block - by flagthrower - 12-11-2017, 03:49 PM
RE: Mental Block - by Keith - 12-11-2017, 10:10 PM
RE: Mental Block - by vagabond - 12-11-2017, 10:12 PM
RE: Mental Block - by flagthrower - 12-12-2017, 07:39 AM
RE: Mental Block - by flowerburgers - 12-15-2017, 03:55 AM
RE: Mental Block - by nibbed - 12-15-2017, 06:23 AM
RE: Mental Block - by Lavieboheme - 12-15-2017, 08:55 AM
RE: Mental Block - by Joseph918 - 12-21-2017, 05:49 PM
RE: Mental Block - by chopblock - 12-24-2017, 12:55 PM
RE: Mental Block - by AndyBryant123 - 03-01-2018, 09:42 AM
RE: Mental Block - by Eat.think.live.peaceful - 03-01-2018, 11:00 AM
RE: Mental Block - by Trophic_Cascade - 03-04-2018, 04:53 PM
RE: Mental Block - by Silfan - 03-04-2018, 07:49 PM
RE: Mental Block - by Lorvick - 03-08-2018, 10:45 AM
RE: Mental Block - by zwubz - 03-19-2018, 01:29 PM
RE: Mental Block - by SpaceDirt - 03-25-2018, 09:57 AM
RE: Mental Block - by kaos - 03-27-2018, 03:37 PM
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