First Edit: The Search
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First Edit:

The Search

Her footprints lead nowhere.
You already know this, but still
you stop and consider:
sunlight screams a warning about day's end,
the wind pushes you back like a guardian angel,
ice hides beneath a white blanket,
untouched as your skin when lying alone.

Your body pulses in defiance, sweat pools
in places you almost forgot existed.
You start to walk, your decision made.


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The Search

Her footprints lead nowhere.
You already know this, but still
you stop and consider:
sunlight screams a warning about day's end,
the wind pushes you back like a guardian angel,
ice hides beneath a white blanket,
cold as your skin when lying alone.

Your body pulses in defiance, sweat pools
in places you almost forgot existed.
Your decision made, you move on.
Time is the best editor.
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First Edit: The Search - by Richard - 12-24-2017, 06:53 AM
RE: The Search - by chopblock - 12-24-2017, 01:09 PM
RE: The Search - by Richard - 12-25-2017, 12:03 AM
RE: First Edit: The Search - by Richard - 01-14-2018, 01:23 AM
RE: First Edit: The Search - by Knot - 01-15-2018, 02:46 AM
RE: First Edit: The Search - by Richard - 01-15-2018, 04:34 AM



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