You're losing you, are you gone.

[CRNDLSM]

I thought about what you said, so I wrote out the whole thing as if I wrote it to try and understand it, so here are my new thoughts 

Soul's mirrors and mind's I like sometimes when words can be either possessive or conjunctive.  Soul is mirrors, mind is study.
study are the eyes,  but really it's true, minds study eyes.  Minds study through the eyes.  A study is both like a room for studying and a verb.
and the verdict is clear, the final judgement is clearly both wild animals in caves,  herding and escorting out of caves, which are like eye sockets if you think about it.
wild animals cave in the 
hollows of your mind, herds,
escorting your thoughts
and opening your eyes wide, animals and thoughts open my eyes and you can see what I see when you study
front window to a i would move spacy to this line cause 'a' is super weak for line ending 
spacy mind's fantasies,  and mind's fantasized works well by itself.  Mind is fantasies,, mind's fantasy's whoa
and easy smiles drawn, cause animals also make me smile easily while opening my eyes wide
as thorny roses pricking and picking thorns absolutely makes me smile
your fingers, you're hurt. Apostrophes are super, this could be your hurt or you are hurt when spoken.  Your finger's would be great too.

Call it gathering of the herds these two lines make it seem more conversational in tone, starting with a command to 'call it' but gathering of the herds is a lame thing to call anything, 
or.... the others showed up. Or call it 'the other's showed up'?  See, conversation switch? I feel like I'm on mushrooms interrpting myself
Snakes spell words ? I think this is cool imagery
One word one snake ? Cool
One stabbing one wolf ? Out of nowhere.  Cause wolf's are wild cave animals who break up herd's, and word's would stab like snakes, questioning
Feels like jungle, go hunting, feels here is the noun, like when a cartoon makes you cry. Hits with the feels, feels go hunting, like jungle.  Because jungle is clearly the name of the wolf.
chase the wild with the risky, this is referring to whiskey isn't it?  Cause whiskey (wild turkey) that gives you feels, and the risk is alcoholism
personalize the unknown, word's of wisdom
then look for the stick. Because wolve's, cause their dogs, and dogs chase sticks, like turkeys in the jungle hunting.
Seems to feel like so seems here is the noun like 'feels' was earlier, only here, seems feel's,
being in other places, 
in their places ? This is my favorite, like replacing in place. Or is that place's 
too small a world ? I don't understand d this line of questioning 
meeting them everywhere, these question marks indicate the tone within the sentence
always away from a home, 
in your home. So true, looking for something, a home, a few, a cave, to mirror the hollows of my mind's study, my mind's eyes, my wild animals herds
You're searching all the time
without looking for something, nice internal rhyme, searching/something
you're here and there and the second and is the most important one here, hence the enjambment
your thoughts everywhere, apostrophe on thoughts please
pages never turned, endless stagnation 
a bit of each on a lot,I forgot lot is a legitimate noun, like drawing lots
starting one and continuing another, because you could start multiple ones, but continuity is key
thoughts are powering you,
natural energizers, yes!
consuming yourself. Yourself seems to imply I am only my thoughts, I would like to say 'you' and leave it at that
You're consumed unhappily, your consummation unhappily sleeps seated, eating laid, sounds better to me.
sleeping seated and eating laid, I would like 'getting laid' instead
waiting with the mornings for light. Yes, because mornings aren't already lit.
Enjoy watching the horizon 
at the sea shores,
not the sky, sounds sarcastic, then sincere.  The sky is too big on too small a world, but the horizon has the key
guess how big the world is, see? Boom! Too small? Don't worry about it!
don't wonder what's on on or off nice enjambment
it's other side, reporting that's right, reporting, but I want a comma here so leave of absence really stand alone
leave of absence.
You always want to see
where your sight can't reach. Your sight can't each the sky, thats why you're always looking at it instead of the horizon.    
Look at the mirror look at my eyes
and see something. Searching
Where are you ? In place, in their place
You seem to think, it's not worthy it. There is seem again, it is worthy it though, thoughts are always worthy of thought, unless it is something else, searxhing 
But everything ?  Everybody ?
Who's remote, you or the others. Who is remote, or the remote is yours and the others, but The others shown up with the gathering of herds in the mirror
Where those you looked for are ? Where I are they
You are leaving us, finally I feel like you're really telling me something
if you could look at me and see my my, mine, mind, minds, mine's,  if this was spoken you'd have tons of room to make up meaning
concerns, would you stay with us. If the study was mirrored, then you'd be leaving us, like a wild animal herding
It's not an end, everyone knows there are many ends, making ends 
forests will keep making oxygen, I like this line, even though it's true, you reference jungle earlier and I think most earth oxygen comes from algae.
 the sun, light and 
the seas, rain's water. Too many facts here, rain is water, seas are light, while rains can be heavy
Live, Alive. How about, 'live, live' cause they're pronounced differently and spelled the same

Thank you for helping me focus my thoughts on this piece.