You're losing you, are you gone.
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for [b]QDeathstar[/b]



POEM 1
Curl up

Protect yourself
Your head
Your Heart
your Being

The onslaught

Push forward
one step

Each moment a lost one

Nothing to sink into
Nothing to become

The torrent continues

Breathe.  Recall the Reason

But death, ever present.  cutting

Each moment a thief
stealing your soul
steeling your soul


POEM 2

Open door, a room crammed with furniture.

People packed in, squirming salmon in a small pond.
Large dogs pacing, panting, sniffing, climbing on and off furniture.
Voices scolding, arms crossed tight.
Scent of turkey and gravy mingle with wet dog and dry dog food.
 
The oppressor, fear.  A life sacrificed, mine.
 
Open doors, tables spread out in expansive spaces.
Warm smiles, arms spread wide in welcome greetings.  
Great windows floor to ceiling let in soft autumn light.
Glasses clinking, cozy fire crackling.
Smells of roast beef and fresh baked bread fuse with apple cider and scrumptious pecan pies.

 
The choice is made.


POEM 3

Please step away from the door
this train is about to depart
if you have no destination in mind
there is no end to this line

the world outside my window
blurred with a thickening frost
standing waves of moving places
imposed and distorted my thought

Please move your bags aside
the doors cannot close
don't contemplate those needful things
and surrender to all your woes

I saw distant conviction
A dilapidated structure 
chemically stained with human regret
resonating as it ruptured

Please remain seated
I think the conductor is lost
he was reaching for a map
and pressed the emergency stop

born and bred a thundering steed 
I was forged with fire
I ride alone down these tracks
leaving behind what you desire

YOURS    QDeathstar 

Attrition:

Of words bounced off
me and on to you.
We aren't aren't saying playing
until we do. after.

We've crafted careful outs -
snarky innocents.

We are always right
I've asked her and she asked you.
We all agree we are clever.

Your words bounce off me
and into your skull 
like a bullet.

Pull the trigger.
But it's not about you.


Nothing More Mediocre


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P.S.   "Mother  language enlighten my roads to wisdom."     
          "....It is not the reader who is responsible for deciphering the authors intent..." Some people's                               nvolvement in  poetry is totally inappropriate, authors or critiques.


Messages In This Thread
You're losing you, are you gone. - by Rorf Asalis - 12-19-2017, 02:45 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by CRNDLSM - 12-20-2017, 08:14 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by Leanne - 12-20-2017, 08:44 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by Hannah - 12-20-2017, 01:22 PM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by nibbed - 12-21-2017, 03:29 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by Rorf Asalis - 12-23-2017, 01:43 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by Todd - 12-23-2017, 02:46 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by CRNDLSM - 12-23-2017, 07:58 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by Leanne - 12-24-2017, 08:48 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by milo - 12-25-2017, 03:59 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by ellajam - 12-25-2017, 04:10 AM



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