12-21-2017, 08:25 PM
(12-21-2017, 03:29 AM)nibbed Wrote: ........I think the poem was trying to say something about taking chances, but is saying more than it really needs to, or with too many words. Perhaps it could have been shortened to just this:This responce seems to me as coming from a serious person, how come such a person with poetic vein misses the true message: Some times, some people don't step on the ground firmly and they feel shaky. It's obvious that the person is scared and confuced (him/her not the reader, nothing is implied here, ha,ha.)
Wild & Risky
It's not an end,
forests will keep making oxygen;
the sunlight and seas, rain's water.
Live, Alive.
I guess that all of us choose what they feel is closer to what THEY HAVE IN THEIR MIND and that's what's left after turning the page.
Good or mediocre or bad way of expressing it, it's not me to judge off course, but the subject is a VERY IMPORTANT ONE, as very many live in this state for long periods of time or all their lives.
Have you read one on this matter ?
P.S. What was left to me from this, was Dearborn,MI and ford where I worked, very long ago. You see what I mean.
