Derailed

Derailed

Joseph918
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12-21-2017, 05:38 PM

Punctuation aside its a great poem I think. It is flooded with metaphors that it makes you think where exactly the poem or train is going...haha. But what I got from it was comparing life and a moving train which are very similar. Great job! Big Grin

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