Although I’m Dust
#11
I like it better now, too. It looks neater.
I'm weird about forms being squared,
having stray lines that go too far beyond the margins of other lines, like this one (unless there's purpose, like this one).
I searched terms for a better way to tell you,
but I couldn't find it. I like this better.


-nibbed
there's always a better reason to love
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Messages In This Thread
Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-10-2017, 09:45 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by vagabond - 12-14-2017, 01:19 PM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by nibbed - 12-14-2017, 05:50 PM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-15-2017, 01:00 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by nibbed - 12-15-2017, 02:44 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by ellajam - 12-15-2017, 03:52 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by Lizzie - 12-15-2017, 02:57 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-15-2017, 06:22 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by RiverNotch - 12-18-2017, 11:41 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-18-2017, 12:06 PM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by nibbed - 12-21-2017, 03:47 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-21-2017, 05:38 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by nibbed - 12-21-2017, 06:00 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by Leanne - 12-21-2017, 05:59 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-21-2017, 08:34 AM



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