12-20-2017, 08:14 AM
I feel like this is already in a book somewhere. The formatting, the vague... everything. Some of the language sounds better than listens. Well, I get lost, can't keep a train of thought. I look for reasons and tell myself it's all intentional.
What I would do is pick out my favorite lines and shorten this about halfway, but maybe it's all necessary. Good luck, sorry I can't be more helpful
What I would do is pick out my favorite lines and shorten this about halfway, but maybe it's all necessary. Good luck, sorry I can't be more helpful
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches

