You're losing you, are you gone.
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I feel like this is already in a book somewhere. The formatting, the vague... everything. Some of the language sounds better than listens. Well, I get lost, can't keep a train of thought. I look for reasons and tell myself it's all intentional.

What I would do is pick out my favorite lines and shorten this about halfway, but maybe it's all necessary. Good luck, sorry I can't be more helpful
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Messages In This Thread
You're losing you, are you gone. - by Rorf Asalis - 12-19-2017, 02:45 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by CRNDLSM - 12-20-2017, 08:14 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by Leanne - 12-20-2017, 08:44 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by Hannah - 12-20-2017, 01:22 PM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by nibbed - 12-21-2017, 03:29 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by Todd - 12-23-2017, 02:46 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by CRNDLSM - 12-23-2017, 07:58 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by Leanne - 12-24-2017, 08:48 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by milo - 12-25-2017, 03:59 AM
RE: You're losing you, are you gone. - by ellajam - 12-25-2017, 04:10 AM



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