A Tale of Two Choices

[Rorf Asalis]

"Open door, a room crammed with furniture." I'm sorry to say that there is nothing poetic in this line, and it's the very first line. If it was the front door of a house, one would have turned his back and go elsewhere. Although not good at thinking for others, I will dare to say that something like this would have been preferable: 'free to enter, but no place to stay, so much woodwork around', indirectlly I picture what in my opinion you have in mind, writing what you wrote, or not. I repeat that I'm only trying to explain what I meant and not suggesting the exact wording, I'm sure you would have found abetter one if you wanted. You do this in: 
"Warm smiles, arms spread wide in welcome greetings.  
Great windows floor to ceiling let in soft autumn light." very well.
"Smells of roast beef and fresh baked bread fuse with apple cider and scrumptious pecan pies." That's good for advertising only. Do you need it.