A Light Source (title change)

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I'm convinced you're the type

who'd pull out the long ladder

climb into rafters

risk mouthfuls of camel dust

and pink glass hair

just to grab a heap of

once upon a time

whatever-am-I-going-to-do

with these still good yellow pages

only to happily                                  stumble over "only". i think you could start with "you happily stack..."

stack them high

upon a once empty chair                            maybe leave out "once"

so some little kid                           it could be "the" instead of "some" if you mean the person adressed here

can have a nice supper

with the rest of the adults.

this is an original read.

most images remain surreal to me but i think the poem still delivers a pretty good point of which i am unsure if it differs from your intended one, but doesn´t matter. i like it.

I love your suggestions, vagabond!
They cleaned up the poem, nicely.

Thank you!

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