12-18-2017, 01:18 AM
(12-15-2017, 01:10 AM)dukealien Wrote: Mood
When that Mood manifests,
every thing attests
to shocking beauty of
all that's in sight.
Dead leaves go painterly
in drifts of color we
can't help but rhapsodize
with all our might.
Is it this Mood that makes
dead things a scene that wakes not sure about dead used twice
feelings of majesty,
awe and delight?
Or does that fickle Mood
form in our solitude
born out of happenstance
when the scene's right? good question, I see the word panoramic, but it's just me
Not to be knocking anybody or anything, but this is the best poem drifting around here in awhile, worth coming back to over and over. It is well worded in wisdom and quite the genius, can fit to two different types of readers in its subtlety. I like the structure of the stanzas, too. This is a tough subject and was touched on very cleverly.
thanks for the read
nibbed
there's always a better reason to love

