12-18-2017, 01:01 AM
Our sun crusts our waning moon.
It’s our vision, prophetic doom
we pray to be enlightenment I stumbled nearly each time I read this part. My mind's tongue said, "we pray to be enlightened"
that shines for our purpose.
Trapped in our pretentious dreams,
our prayers become our cackling screams
as inflammation bursts and casts
our waning moon to dust. Is it the moon that's dust, or the star? Is the star the moon?
It burns for no one purpose.
I like how it feels as though stardust is a twinkling of good will,
but I was a little confused about whether it was moon dust
or stardust. I think moon dust would glow, but stardust
would sparkle.
-nibbed
It’s our vision, prophetic doom
we pray to be enlightenment I stumbled nearly each time I read this part. My mind's tongue said, "we pray to be enlightened"
that shines for our purpose.
Trapped in our pretentious dreams,
our prayers become our cackling screams
as inflammation bursts and casts
our waning moon to dust. Is it the moon that's dust, or the star? Is the star the moon?
It burns for no one purpose.
I like how it feels as though stardust is a twinkling of good will,
but I was a little confused about whether it was moon dust
or stardust. I think moon dust would glow, but stardust
would sparkle.
-nibbed
there's always a better reason to love