Third Draft: Sleepless

Third Draft: Sleepless

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#19

12-17-2017, 05:33 AM

Hey all,
I've made some changes to this poem. I really experimented with the second stanza. Feel free to let me know if it's an improvement.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

Time is the best editor.

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Messages In This Thread

Third Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-15-2017, 05:29 AM

RE: Sleepless - by rose - 10-19-2017, 01:06 AM

RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 01:50 AM

RE: Sleepless - by rose - 10-19-2017, 02:30 AM

RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 02:38 AM

RE: Sleepless - by ellajam - 10-19-2017, 02:43 AM

RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 02:58 AM

RE: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-19-2017, 10:29 AM

RE: Sleepless - by illya_v - 10-19-2017, 12:57 PM

RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-25-2017, 12:52 PM

RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Knot - 10-25-2017, 11:50 PM

RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-26-2017, 01:03 PM

RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-13-2017, 04:55 AM

RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Knot - 11-13-2017, 11:27 PM

RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-14-2017, 12:05 PM

RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by jackjackjack - 11-15-2017, 12:52 AM

RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by nibbed - 11-16-2017, 12:26 PM

RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-16-2017, 12:40 PM

RE: Third Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 12-17-2017, 05:33 AM

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