12-16-2017, 06:06 AM
I enjoyed the read,
I also think your word choices fit the poem .
The content is interesting and relate-able in that we usually see things a certain way according to the mood we are in.
My only nit is the S3 in needs clarification, don't get how ...it is this mood that makes dead things a scene that wakes a feeling of majesty??? takes me way off the point.
Other than that.
Nice work
Best
Linda
I also think your word choices fit the poem .
The content is interesting and relate-able in that we usually see things a certain way according to the mood we are in.
My only nit is the S3 in needs clarification, don't get how ...it is this mood that makes dead things a scene that wakes a feeling of majesty??? takes me way off the point.
Other than that.
Nice work
Best
Linda