12-14-2017, 01:09 PM
I loved it, good use of repetition. One edit might make it come off the tongue better:
Original:
ain't no hoodoo you can do
that i can't also do to you
ain't no voodoo you can mumbo
that i can't translate the lingo
ain't no hoodoo i can't do too
Edited:
ain't no hoodoo you can do
that i can't also do to you
ain't no voodoo you can mumbo
that i can't translate the lingo
ain't no hoodoo i can't do though
It's a more similar sounding word and it makes the rhyme sound nice
Original:
ain't no hoodoo you can do
that i can't also do to you
ain't no voodoo you can mumbo
that i can't translate the lingo
ain't no hoodoo i can't do too
Edited:
ain't no hoodoo you can do
that i can't also do to you
ain't no voodoo you can mumbo
that i can't translate the lingo
ain't no hoodoo i can't do though
It's a more similar sounding word and it makes the rhyme sound nice
