12-12-2017, 10:38 AM
Hey Knot,
The formatting of the first four lines of the poem is to set up a scene that seems ordinary, and then surprise the reader with something out of the ordinary.
As for the gnome/knight stanzas, I have yet to find a way to rewrite it, but I'm glad you found the knights funny.
This'll continue to be tweaked. As for now, here's my fifth edit.
Best, Alex
The formatting of the first four lines of the poem is to set up a scene that seems ordinary, and then surprise the reader with something out of the ordinary.
As for the gnome/knight stanzas, I have yet to find a way to rewrite it, but I'm glad you found the knights funny.
This'll continue to be tweaked. As for now, here's my fifth edit.
Best, Alex