Although I’m Dust
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Although I’m Dust

We held hands and I kissed her 
for a second time, untouched. 
I scribbled a sad word 
onto the side of her face 
which she mistook for a compliment.
  
And then and there,  
outside of her,  
outside of o-me-o-my, 
I took a knife to love’s system of signs. 
 
—Help me cut through this thing, 
this simple little thing. 
She couldn’t do it; 
but my, she sure was pretty. 

[cymbal crash]


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Although I’m Dust

We held hands and I kissed her 
for a second time, untouched. 
I scribbled a sad word 
onto the side of her face 
which she mistook for a compliment.
  
And then and there,  
outside of her,  
outside of o-me-o-my, 
I took a knife to love’s system of signs. 
 
—Help me cut through this thing, 
this simple little thing. 
She couldn’t do it; 
but my, she sure was pretty.


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Although I’m Dust

We held hands and I kissed her 
for a second time, untouched. 
I scribbled some sad word  
onto the side of her face 
which she mistakenly took as a compliment.
  
And then and there,  
outside of her,  
outside of o-me-o-my, 
I took a knife to love’s system of signs. 
 
—Help me cut through this thing, 
this simple little thing. 
She couldn’t do it; 
but my, she sure was pretty.  


[cymbal crash] 
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Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-10-2017, 09:45 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by vagabond - 12-14-2017, 01:19 PM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by nibbed - 12-14-2017, 05:50 PM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-15-2017, 01:00 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by nibbed - 12-15-2017, 02:44 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by ellajam - 12-15-2017, 03:52 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by Lizzie - 12-15-2017, 02:57 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-15-2017, 06:22 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by RiverNotch - 12-18-2017, 11:41 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-18-2017, 12:06 PM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by nibbed - 12-21-2017, 03:47 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-21-2017, 05:38 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by nibbed - 12-21-2017, 06:00 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by Leanne - 12-21-2017, 05:59 AM
RE: Although I’m Dust - by shemthepenman - 12-21-2017, 08:34 AM



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