12-06-2017, 11:39 AM
A Sampler Book (Platform Echoes)
Memorial to a Woman
Bought a book for a buck(brillo bbs) what does that mean?
with coins dug from my purse, (dunno bout dug... collected, cremated, exhumed/excavated/gouged/unearthed?) no
musty bound leather (musky/dusky/crinkled/creased/handworn) is musty not a word?
cloaking temperance verse; (like cloaking but maybe concealing/covering/sheathing/obscuring?) I like cloaking, too
engraved and fancy,
I was drawn to the cover,
smells of old books
oft my second choice lover;
found it packed full
lacking only one poem, (wot one???? tell me do!) one from him
didn't open it wide
'til I got all the way home.
A book salesman's volume,
filled with choices and all,
not elaborate as my Tennyson,
older, more tall. (tall? enlongated/explained/extended/extensive/lofty/etc) -tall rhymes with all and well, it was
Did Lord Tennyson choose a taller book
his extravagant cover
from similar samples
of extra fine leather? (mefinks superior/surpassing exceptional/noteworthy/firstrate?) -yes, why do you sound Amish?
An option of spines,
all embossed in a row?
Trim work, plain letters,
or gold leaf aglow?
A Victorian widow, (who dat mama?) -nevermind, not Amish, now rap
she just could not see
how ridding herself
of that old tool would be; (gee tool? dunno? psalmry/hymnal/guidebook/doctrine?) -her husbands tool of his trade
her loss of companion,
pining part of him there: (part? not plural?)
she sewed twenty-two workings, (swishy sses and wooing wwwws) -thanks for noticing, I hadn't
into pages, so fair;
webs of filigree cotton (hmmm cotton? silk/fancy/frills/embellishments/ decals/crop circles/paper doilys/snowflakes/inkblot explosions?) yep, doilies
proved frugality's perk, (noice) -I think I maybe should say
a sampler, unknown, (dunno unknown? maybe tributing/exhorting/exhibiting/illustrating/pictorial/patterned?) thanks?
of another great work;
how many those hankies
were pinned, used, and sewn?
Delicately crafted (crafted? perhaps embroidered/ displayed/exhibited/drawn/detailed/created) yeah, displayed might be
distractions, her own. good, I kept getting weird
trying to find a fit.
pretty fabulistic addicted to old books too over embroidery
nibbled nicely niblet thanks that was sweet of you
to kindly reply, again
-nibbed
Memorial to a Woman
Bought a book for a buck(brillo bbs) what does that mean?
with coins dug from my purse, (dunno bout dug... collected, cremated, exhumed/excavated/gouged/unearthed?) no
musty bound leather (musky/dusky/crinkled/creased/handworn) is musty not a word?
cloaking temperance verse; (like cloaking but maybe concealing/covering/sheathing/obscuring?) I like cloaking, too
engraved and fancy,
I was drawn to the cover,
smells of old books
oft my second choice lover;
found it packed full
lacking only one poem, (wot one???? tell me do!) one from him
didn't open it wide
'til I got all the way home.
A book salesman's volume,
filled with choices and all,
not elaborate as my Tennyson,
older, more tall. (tall? enlongated/explained/extended/extensive/lofty/etc) -tall rhymes with all and well, it was
Did Lord Tennyson choose a taller book
his extravagant cover
from similar samples
of extra fine leather? (mefinks superior/surpassing exceptional/noteworthy/firstrate?) -yes, why do you sound Amish?
An option of spines,
all embossed in a row?
Trim work, plain letters,
or gold leaf aglow?
A Victorian widow, (who dat mama?) -nevermind, not Amish, now rap
she just could not see
how ridding herself
of that old tool would be; (gee tool? dunno? psalmry/hymnal/guidebook/doctrine?) -her husbands tool of his trade
her loss of companion,
pining part of him there: (part? not plural?)
she sewed twenty-two workings, (swishy sses and wooing wwwws) -thanks for noticing, I hadn't
into pages, so fair;
webs of filigree cotton (hmmm cotton? silk/fancy/frills/embellishments/ decals/crop circles/paper doilys/snowflakes/inkblot explosions?) yep, doilies
proved frugality's perk, (noice) -I think I maybe should say
a sampler, unknown, (dunno unknown? maybe tributing/exhorting/exhibiting/illustrating/pictorial/patterned?) thanks?
of another great work;
how many those hankies
were pinned, used, and sewn?
Delicately crafted (crafted? perhaps embroidered/ displayed/exhibited/drawn/detailed/created) yeah, displayed might be
distractions, her own. good, I kept getting weird
trying to find a fit.
pretty fabulistic addicted to old books too over embroidery
nibbled nicely niblet thanks that was sweet of you
to kindly reply, again
-nibbed
there's always a better reason to love

