12-04-2017, 12:56 PM
As this is a poem and not a haiku, a little bit more of a rhythmic quality could be injected to keep the poem from being so stilted. Otherwise it is just a prose sentence.
"Keep going--I tell myself--it'll be one less thing you'll have to do in a minute.
Best,
dale
"Keep going--I tell myself--it'll be one less thing you'll have to do in a minute.
Best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.