11-26-2017, 11:23 AM
Hey Wjames,
Thanks for the suggestions. I've played around with the similes/metaphors in this one quite a bit. It actually started out as, "Snow is paper".
That was actually my intention with using "changing wind", but I'm uncertain if if it works on a literal level. However, you've given me something to think about with it.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the suggestions. I've played around with the similes/metaphors in this one quite a bit. It actually started out as, "Snow is paper".
That was actually my intention with using "changing wind", but I'm uncertain if if it works on a literal level. However, you've given me something to think about with it.
Thanks again,
Richard
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