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First Edit: Legacy
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11-24-2017, 03:43 AM
(11-23-2017, 02:17 PM)Richard Wrote: Paper is like snow,I like the idea of paper and words being footprints in the snow, it makes me think of a grander design, brail on a vast scale, not so sure chaniging wind is the right choice here. maybe fresh flurry or fresh fall ? your poem. I think you could lose 'up' too. Best keith If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out |
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First Edit: Legacy - by Richard - 11-23-2017, 02:17 PM
RE: Legacy - by Keith - 11-24-2017, 03:43 AM
RE: Legacy - by Richard - 11-24-2017, 12:04 PM
RE: Legacy - by nibbed - 11-25-2017, 04:07 PM
RE: First Edit: Legacy - by Richard - 11-26-2017, 04:13 AM
RE: First Edit: Legacy - by vagabond - 11-26-2017, 06:21 AM
RE: First Edit: Legacy - by Richard - 11-26-2017, 08:22 AM
RE: First Edit: Legacy - by Wjames - 11-26-2017, 09:46 AM
RE: First Edit: Legacy - by Richard - 11-26-2017, 11:23 AM
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