smoke signs

[nibbed]

I have to reply before I finish this egg sammich and have no brains at all.


smoke signs in altitude              -this reminded me of time when I thought God had left me and some wonderful pilot sky-wrote Jesus Loves You
                                                                                                                                                                                           freeing me from woe.
clouds left my mouth,              - words of spoken confusion
leaving me
with less breath left
to give reply.
this one goes out
into the sky,
grows furtive wings                    -wondering why furtive at all
to be unshaped
and then
to be erased in wind.                  - this might seem "bad", but it could also be very good for unseen reasons. I want to say the twin "to be"s
                                                                                                                                                                      might be reworked.

This could either be a message in a bottle lost at sea metaphor,
someone who smokes may be taken less serious, a misunderstanding,
or something ignored.

I like your poetry.


-nibbed