Edit 5: Sailing to Tawnydale
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Sailing to Tawnydale 


Among the sweetgum balls, acorns,  
crinkly leaves and pine needles  
are muddy footprints, 
 
                        deep and dragon-made.  
There, the tree sap smells like cinnamon;  
squirrels scurry in those knobby boughs of gold  
and ignore oaken monotone requests to stop.  
Some respond with mocking laughter through  
bulbous cheeks and end up choking. The trees  
simply sigh a chilly breeze of resignation. 
 
Tiny grumpy men in pointy red hats live 
in burrows wide as pumpkins, by the road 
where mounted phantom knights roam around.  
 
Cracking jokes on horseback, 
they look to talk to anyone within sight. 
Ah, our fellow gnomes are out and about. 
Hello! Hel- hello good sir! Excuse me!  
Sir! How does your morning fare? Excu... 
The burrow-dwellers waddle on with  
no patience for talk as small as their 
furniture they'd stub their toes on. 
 
A couple furlongs from those woods, 
bipedal shepherd dogs in overalls who raise 
livestock and tend farms, would ask 
their scarecrows how they're holding up 
and feed them cool leftover okra stew—made  
with everything they've sown beneath the sun  
and a never-setting harvest moon. 
 
East of Lake Honeygill, 
stars stumbled drunk and fell upon  
the overlooking ochre peaks guffawing 
where giants guzzle kegs of mead,  
in taverns booming with the belting-out  
about the Early Winged Shadow, Malgok 
being slain by Polimon the Pillar. 
 
I was in my room, drawing pictures of you. 
From my desk, throughout the sun's ascent,  
I heard a buzzing noise that sounded like  
a lawnmower cutting grass. 

Edit 4: Sailing to Tawnydale


Among the sweetgum balls, acorns,  
crinkly leaves and pine needles  
are muddy footprints, 
 
                        deep and dragon-made.  
There, the tree sap smells like cinnamon;  
squirrels scuttle within knobby boughs gold  
and ignore oaken monotone requests to stop.  
Some respond with mocking laughter through 
bulbous cheeks and end up choking. The trees  
simply sigh a resigned chilly breeze. 
 
Tiny grumpy men in pointy red hats live 
in burrows wide as pumpkins, by the road 
where mounted phantom knights roam around.  
 
Cracking jokes on horseback, 
they look to talk to anyone within sight. 
Ah, our fellow gnomes are out and about. 
Hello! Hel- hello good sir! Excuse me!  
Sir! How does your morning fare? Excu... 
The burrow-dwellers waddle on with  
no patience for talk as small as their
chairs they'd stub their toes on. 
 
Couple furlongs from those woods, 
bipedal shepherd dogs in overalls who raise 
livestock and tend farms, would ask 
their scarecrows how they're holding up 
and feed them cool leftover okra stew— 
made with everything sown beneath the sun  
and a never-setting harvest moon. 
 
East of Lake Honeygill, 
stars stumbled drunk and fell upon  
the overlooking ochre mountains laughing 
where the giants drink their kegs of mead, 
in taverns booming with the night's festivities. 
 
I was in my room, drawing pictures of you. 
From my desk, throughout the sun's ascent,  
I heard the buzzing noise that sounded like  
a lawnmower cutting grass. 


Edit 3: Sailing to Tawnydale


Sweetgum balls, acorns, crinkly  
leaves and pine needles are scattered  
in shapes of 
 
                        dragon footprints. 
There, the tree sap smells like cinnamon;  
squirrels scurry across knobby boughs of gold 
and ignore oaken monotone requests to stop.  
Some respond with laughter through 
bulbous cheeks to end up choking.  
The trees just sigh into the breeze. 
 
Tiny grumpy men in pointy red hats hop 
in and out burrows big as pumpkins, by the road 
where mounted phantom knights roam around.  
 
Cracking jokes on horseback, they look 
to talk to anything within sight. 
Ah, our fellow gnomes are out and about. 
Hello! Hel- hello good sir! Excuse me!  
Sir! How does your morning fare? Excu...
The burrow-dwellers waddle on, indifferent. 
 
About a mile from those woods, 
bipedal shepherd dogs in overalls who raise 
livestock and tend farms, would ask 
their scarecrows how they're holding up 
and feed them cool leftover okra stew— 
made with everything sown beneath the sun  
and a never-setting harvest moon. 
 
It seemed the stars stumbled drunk from the sky 
and fell upon those ochre mountains laughing 
where the giants drink their kegs of mead, 
in taverns booming with the night's festivities. 
 
I was in my room,  
drawing pictures of you. From my desk, 
throughout the sun's ascent, I heard  
the buzzing noise that sounded like 
a lawnmower cutting grass. 

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Edit 2: Sailing to Tawnydale 


Among the clutter of sweetgum balls,  
pine needles, leaves, and acorns are  
 
                        a dragon's footprints. 
Here, the tree sap smells like cinnamon;  
squirrels scurry across twisted boughs of gold, 
ignoring monotone requests from trees to stop.  
Some respond in laughter through their cheeks,  
plump as grapes; at times they end up choking.  
The trees just sigh into the breeze. 
 
Tiny grumpy men in pointy red hats hop 
in and out of burrows big as pumpkins; they 
seldom talk with anyone. That changes when 
bands of mounted phantom knights who travel 
roads, love to joke, and laugh like someone 
with a stomach or any organ really, tries to make 
conversation with those tiny burrow-dwellers 
till they become annoyed. 
 
Bipedal shepherd dogs in overalls who raise 
livestock and tend farms, occasionally ask 
their scarecrows how they're holding up 
and would hand them cool leftover okra stew— 
made with everything reaped beneath the sun  
and a never-setting harvest moon. 
 
Where the stars stumbled drunk from the sky 
and fell upon those ochre mountains laughing, 
is where the giants drink their kegs of mead, 
in taverns booming full of song and laughter. 
 
I was in my room,  
sketching all about you. From my desk, 
throughout the sun's climb, I heard 
the buzzing noise that sounded like 
a lawnmower cutting grass. 


Edit 1: Sailing to Tawnydale


Sweetgum balls, acorns, leaves, 
and pine needles are scattered  
in sets of  
 
                        dragon footprints.  
Here, tree sap smells like cinnamon; 
squirrels scurry across twisted boughs of gold, 
ignoring monotone requests from trees to stop. 
Some respond in laughter through their cheeks, 
plump as grapes; at times they end up choking.  
The trees just sigh into the breeze. 
 
Tiny grumpy men in pointy red hats hop 
in and out of burrows big as pumpkins; they 
seldom talk with anyone. That changes when 
bands of mounted phantom knights who travel 
roads, love to joke, and laugh like someone 
with a stomach or any organ really, tries to make 
conversation with those tiny burrow-dwellers 
till they become annoyed. 

Bipedal shepherd dogs in overalls who raise 
livestock and tend farms, occasionally ask 
their scarecrows' how they're holding up 
and would hand them cool leftover okra stew— 
made with everything reaped beneath the sun  
and a never-setting harvest moon. 

Where the stars stumbled drunk from the sky 
and fell upon those ochre mountains laughing, 
is where the giants drink their kegs of mead, 
in taverns booming full of song and laughter. 
 
I was in my room, 
sketching all about you. From my desk, 
throughout the sun's climb, I heard
the buzzing noise that sounded like 
a lawnmower cutting grass.


Original: Sailing to Tawnydale


Sweetgum balls, acorns, leaves, 
and pine needles are scattered  
in the shapes of  
 
                        dragon footprints.
Tree sap aromas fill the air like cinnamon. 
Squirrels scamper twisted boughs of gold
ignoring monotone requests from trees to stop. 
Some respond in laughter through their cheeks, 
plump as grapes, at times to end up choking.  
The trees just sigh into the breeze. 
 
Tiny grumpy men in pointy red hats   
hop in and out of burrows big as pumpkins, 
who rarely talk with anyone except for when 
they're talked to by bands of mounted knights,
who travel roads, and crack jokes that echo  
in their armor, followed by laughs that belong  
to someone with a stomach  
                       or any organ, for that matter.
 
Bipedal shepherd dogs, who raise
livestock and tend farms, occasionally ask  
their scarecrows' how they're holding up,
and would hand them cool leftover okra stew—   
made with everything reaped beneath the sun  
and a never-setting harvest moon. 

Where the stars stumbled drunk from the sky 
and fell upon those ochre mountains laughing,
is where the giants drink their kegs of mead, 
in taverns booming full of song and laughter. 
 
I was in my room,
sketching all about you. At my desk, 
throughout the sun's climb, I heard
the buzzing noise that sounded like 
a lawnmower cutting grass.  
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Edit 5: Sailing to Tawnydale - by alonso ramoran - 11-20-2017, 08:12 AM
RE: Sailing to Tawnydale - by Quixilated - 11-21-2017, 01:04 PM
RE: Sailing to Tawnydale - by Achebe - 11-21-2017, 04:51 PM
RE: Edit 1: Sailing to Tawnydale - by Achebe - 11-22-2017, 08:16 AM
RE: Edit 2: Sailing to Tawnydale - by Knot - 11-23-2017, 03:05 AM
RE: Edit 3: Sailing to Tawnydale - by Knot - 11-24-2017, 11:25 PM
RE: Edit 4: Sailing to Tawnydale - by Knot - 11-26-2017, 11:24 PM
RE: Edit 5: Sailing to Tawnydale - by Knot - 12-12-2017, 09:21 PM



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