11-17-2017, 09:12 AM
(11-14-2017, 10:39 AM)Persadia Wrote: PushHi Persadia - this is very teen angsty. There are no poetic devices in evidence here, just a lot of cliched sentiment. I would suggest that you read Colin Ward's poetry tips to get started.
Curl up
Protect yourself
Your head
Your Heart
your Being
The onslaught
Push forward
one step
Each moment a lost one
Nothing to sink into
Nothing to become
The torrent continues
Breathe. Recall the Reason
But death, ever present. cutting
Each moment a thief
stealing your soul
steeling your soul
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

