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My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language]
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11-16-2017, 12:49 PM
I like the imagery and the overall tone, but the voice seems to change with every stanza. I'm wondering if that was on purpose and if so what the intent was? The second stanza seems to add an accent to the speaker's voice that I wasn't picking up on in the first. And then in the third stanza the voice gets almost biblical? Or at least grander in voice than the second.
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My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language] - by Caine - 10-10-2017, 11:43 AM
RE: My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language] - by alonso ramoran - 10-10-2017, 12:22 PM
RE: My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language] - by QDeathstar - 10-10-2017, 12:40 PM
RE: My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language] - by Caine - 10-11-2017, 02:01 PM
RE: My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language] - by Caine - 10-10-2017, 12:47 PM
RE: My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language] - by Ineedadrinkor2or3 - 10-17-2017, 11:09 AM
RE: My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language] - by alonso ramoran - 10-11-2017, 02:52 AM
RE: My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language] - by rose - 10-12-2017, 12:56 AM
RE: My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language] - by silentseas - 10-16-2017, 10:34 AM
RE: My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language] - by ClaireLou - 10-18-2017, 07:16 PM
RE: My Kindergarten Teacher [Explicit Language] - by Hannah - 11-16-2017, 12:49 PM
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