Third Draft: Sleepless
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Hey Janine and jackjackjack,
Thanks for the feedback. I'm starting to think this one might be part of something bigger, but when I put it all together, something doesn't seem right. There will definitely be another version at some point.

Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.
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Messages In This Thread
Third Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-15-2017, 05:29 AM
RE: Sleepless - by rose - 10-19-2017, 01:06 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 01:50 AM
RE: Sleepless - by rose - 10-19-2017, 02:30 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 02:38 AM
RE: Sleepless - by ellajam - 10-19-2017, 02:43 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 02:58 AM
RE: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-19-2017, 10:29 AM
RE: Sleepless - by illya_v - 10-19-2017, 12:57 PM
RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-25-2017, 12:52 PM
RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Knot - 10-25-2017, 11:50 PM
RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-26-2017, 01:03 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-13-2017, 04:55 AM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Knot - 11-13-2017, 11:27 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-14-2017, 12:05 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by jackjackjack - 11-15-2017, 12:52 AM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by nibbed - 11-16-2017, 12:26 PM
RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 11-16-2017, 12:40 PM
RE: Third Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 12-17-2017, 05:33 AM



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