Push

[bloated_corpse]

Push

Curl up

Protect yourself
Your head
Your Heart
your Being

The onslaught

Push forward
one step

Each moment a lost one

Nothing to sink into
Nothing to become

The torrent continues

Breathe.  Recall the Reason

But death, ever present.  cutting

Each moment a thief
stealing your soul
steeling your soul

This is a good poem with lots of good words and images that show how well the poem hangs together with a coherent style. I think it is probably a religious poem because you talk about the soul at the end. But you spell "stealing" wrong right at the end so thats' a bit of a negative bit. it also reminded me of something like a car accident and this girl is in the middle of a car accident and seeing her life flashing before her eyes. And I suppose that is why its called push. Like "remember to push your seatbelt in" or something like that from the adverts. But also its like a metaphor aswell for life and we are going to atually die one day anyway. And a car crash is like all of life shrunk into a little bit of time.
#i liked read it @Persadia