Push

[homer1950]

Hello Persadia some thoughts thank you for the nice read

Push

Curl up

It appears you want to create a rolling dynamic with the following lines

I'm not sure it works in that; Head, Heart and Being are not projecting the strength you are wanting. Those words as you have them here fall flat for me. 

Protect yourself - 
Your head 
Your Heart
your Being 


The onslaught - Perhaps this line is better suited to come earlier after "Curl up" 

Push forward
one step

Each moment a lost one- Each moment a vanished one?

Nothing to sink into - Again here I am not feeling the urgency of these lines.
Nothing to become

The torrent continues- Tempest? A tempest is like a hurricane a torrent is like and undertow 


Breathe.  Recall the Reason- As the reader I feel like I missed something

But death, ever present.  cutting

Each moment a thief
stealing your soul
steeling your soul