Edit 6: Eventide

[alonso ramoran]

I know this is just
mild to moderate critique, but
just an itsy thing:

the "to which we complied"
and "to whom we complied"
seemed a bit repetitive.


-nibbed

Fixed it. I think? Sounds a bit better to me. I feel like I'm getting pretty close to the final draft which I'm pretty excited about, it's came a long way