Edit 6: Eventide

Edit 6: Eventide

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#15

11-12-2017, 12:41 PM

I know this is just
mild to moderate critique, but
just an itsy thing:

the "to which we complied"
and "to whom we complied"
seemed a bit repetitive.

-nibbed

there's always a better reason to love

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Edit 6: Eventide - by alonso ramoran - 08-14-2017, 03:15 PM

RE: Eventide - by ellajam - 08-14-2017, 07:10 PM

RE: Eventide - by alonso ramoran - 08-14-2017, 11:07 PM

RE: Eventide - by nibbed - 08-15-2017, 03:53 AM

RE: Eventide - by Todd - 08-15-2017, 04:58 AM

RE: Eventide - by alonso ramoran - 08-15-2017, 10:32 AM

RE: Eventide - by billy - 08-15-2017, 11:07 AM

RE: Edit 2: Eventide - by alonso ramoran - 11-10-2017, 07:43 AM

RE: Edit 2: Eventide - by Knot - 11-11-2017, 12:00 AM

RE: Edit 2: Eventide - by alonso ramoran - 11-11-2017, 01:26 AM

RE: Edit 2: Eventide - by Knot - 11-11-2017, 02:21 AM

RE: Edit 2: Eventide - by alonso ramoran - 11-11-2017, 02:48 AM

RE: Edit 2: Eventide - by nibbed - 11-11-2017, 05:46 AM

RE: Edit 3: Eventide - by alonso ramoran - 11-11-2017, 11:42 AM

RE: Edit 3: Eventide - by nibbed - 11-12-2017, 12:41 PM

RE: Edit 3: Eventide - by alonso ramoran - 11-12-2017, 09:46 PM

RE: Edit 6: Eventide - by alonso ramoran - 10-30-2018, 04:24 AM

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