11-11-2017, 05:46 AM
Alex
After rereading several times and gathering back my comprehension skills, I really like this revision.
I felt the edd, ed, and eddy was awkward, but perhaps necessary for dating the poem. Without
it I think the poem would be timeless. Also, "decrepitude" seems a bit of a harsh word,
though I can't seem to find one as effective.
Good work.
-nibbed
After rereading several times and gathering back my comprehension skills, I really like this revision.
I felt the edd, ed, and eddy was awkward, but perhaps necessary for dating the poem. Without
it I think the poem would be timeless. Also, "decrepitude" seems a bit of a harsh word,
though I can't seem to find one as effective.
Good work.
-nibbed
there's always a better reason to love