10-30-2017, 03:30 AM
Hey vagabond and CRNDLSM,
Thanks for the feedback. This is one of those poems where I wrote it a couple of months ago, and thought it was brilliant at the time. Then I looked at it a couple of days ago and started to question it. I was very curious if readers would think the second stanza works, so I appreciate the comments about that. There will be an edit for this at some point.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. This is one of those poems where I wrote it a couple of months ago, and thought it was brilliant at the time. Then I looked at it a couple of days ago and started to question it. I was very curious if readers would think the second stanza works, so I appreciate the comments about that. There will be an edit for this at some point.
Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.