High Sierra Night

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High Sierra Night

Late at night at altitude
aptly wrapped in warmth these two lines set up a what seems will be a pleasant journey
amid an ambient wind, this line reads well but cuts the relaxing journey, each line from here feels choppy and short, quick paced and slightly interrupting 
I lie staring at glinting
stars flickering through
the shivering tree
canopy above me; I love the rhythm between staring glinting flickering shivering canopy
a full moon illuminates
surrounding snow-capped
mountain peaks and ridges,
silhouetting lower layers of
jagged crags and spires. Some good word choices through this sentence
Breathing in soothing
pine scented air,
I doze off listening to I want 'to' on the next line
snowmelt splash among same with among, snowmelt splash is nice
creek rocks gleaming and I kinda want gleaming on it's own line
in the High Sierra night. Don't think you need this line, but it does clarify through capitalization what the title obscures.

Wish I could see it for real