First Edit: Ghost Story

[vagabond]

Ghost Story

I have seen those who exclaim passion
like a poltergeist shakes its chain.       i thought a poltergeist shakes its chain mainly to frighten.. is that the comparison you intended?

Their words fistless pounding   "fistlessly"?         
one is best to ignore.                                       ...  why?
Their actions composed of blood         and how? and whose blood,"theirs" or "one"´s?
that eventually disappears.
Their motive a dead child                 can´t figure out that either, the 2 following lines fill the image but don´t make it clearer
who wanders an empty hall
in search of heaven.

I have seen these phantoms
fade away in daylight,
never to haunt me again.
 

maybe it would be stronger if you wrote "you " instead of "their" and
"I" instead of "one"

i find  meaning  in the first line and last 3 lines (and it´s interesting),
the other parts give me question marks.