Third Draft: Sleepless

Third Draft: Sleepless

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#10

10-25-2017, 12:52 PM

Hey all,
I made some changes to this one. Feel free to let me know if it's an improvement.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

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Third Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-15-2017, 05:29 AM

RE: Sleepless - by rose - 10-19-2017, 01:06 AM

RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 01:50 AM

RE: Sleepless - by rose - 10-19-2017, 02:30 AM

RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 02:38 AM

RE: Sleepless - by ellajam - 10-19-2017, 02:43 AM

RE: Sleepless - by Keith - 10-19-2017, 02:58 AM

RE: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-19-2017, 10:29 AM

RE: Sleepless - by illya_v - 10-19-2017, 12:57 PM

RE: First Draft: Sleepless - by Richard - 10-25-2017, 12:52 PM

RE: Second Draft: Sleepless - by jackjackjack - 11-15-2017, 12:52 AM

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